Improvement #1: Starting with the main message

21 Dec 2017

In my last post, I discussed trying to learn from my mistakes from paper 1. While I am really happy with how the paper turned out eventually it took a long time (and lots of edits from my advisor!) to get it that way. Consequently, for paper 2 (forthcoming) I decided to almost entirely re-think my process.

Thinking back to the first draft of the first paper, I committed two grave sins:

While 2 is more complex (and will therefore also be the subject of future posts), 1 is definitely avoidable! Consequently the first thing that I did when writing this paper was to think about the following.

  1. What does the previous literature say about my topic? (I focused this by deep reading into 2-3 papers and also skimming 5 or so other papers)

  2. How is my study different from the previous literature?

  3. What are the main result(s) of my study?

  4. What is my most interesting/unexpected/cool result?

  5. How do the results of my study contribute to the literature?

  6. What is the main message of my paper?

I had already written the answer to 2. (inadvertently) in a lab meeting presentation, so the first thing that I formally wrote for the paper was 5 section headers, which corresponded to each of my results sections. That way, I always results of the paper as a guide.

Here is a screen shot of my first round of Results headers.

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Want to try this for yourself? Here’s a worksheet to help you!